The main advice that published authors give to young writers is to make sure that the language is descriptive (like in any descriptive writing). Humans have five main senses, and when you write stories, you should create settings and characters using all five senses.
A good way to integrate these five senses is to start with the senses that are the farthest away and work inwards:
You don't need to use all five senses at once, but your descriptions should show not tell your reader as much as possible.
Look around you and write a description of what you see based on those five senses. Use your descriptions deliberately to turn something ordinary into something extraordinary and intriguing. Here's our example:
She could hear the low grade buzzing sound of the refrigerator. It was old and probably should have been replaced a long time ago. Now, no matter what, there was a low motor buzz like busy bees. The light from the other room flickered, so she looked up to see what it was. The buzzing of the fridge suddenly stopped, and there was only the flickering light and silence. She waited, and then she began to smell something, something burning. It tickled the inside of her nose, rubbing her nostrils with its strong scent. She couldn't identify it; sour and hot all at once, maybe burnt rubber. She got up to see what was going on, and as she stood, the lights went out entirely, and she was in the dark. In the shock of it she bit her tongue and tasted the metal of her own blood mingling with the burnt rubber smell stuck in her nose...
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Now, it's your turn! And remember this is just practice to get you started on your ambition to be an author, blogger, script writer, video game story developer etc, so just write, write, write and let your imagination take you wherever it wants!
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Have fun...and be creative!
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